2012年11月7日 星期三

alex and merbear

Some comps of alex encountering the merbear.  Sorry that I haven't been posting anything new this week....A family member passed this week, so its been tough motivating myself to get back to work.  Feedback would be great and once i pick one, i'll probably finish it tomorrow...thanks.

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  1. I like the top left, looks very clear. The major thing I'd change is Alex's arm ( I can't understand what it's doing right now), and I also like the comp where the bear's head is partly cut out, maybe you could do that to the top-left comp too? to make the bear would fill the negative-space on the left.

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    1. thanks christy. His hand is supposed to be placed on the backside of the chair. As if he was passing through the space before he meets the merbear. I'll try out a combination of the two on the top.

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  2. Sorry to hear that Kevan :{
    I like the top left one as well. Just watch your perspective and keep in mind if we're looking from Alex's point of view, we should be seeing more of the bear's underside

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