present for Dang

Hey Dang!  I took a look at your moment piece, and I think you might want to clarify the composition a little.   You don't have to take my composition if you don't want to.  The characters were competing in the composition, and we could not see your acting.  Will probably change it to something like this in my boards.

In the draw over, Grandma is getting some milk freom the fridge for the coco.

 btw!  thanks for the pizza!!!!