I agree with what Kevan said, that it's a little hard to understand what's happening. I believe that Kate is next to Alex on the left? it is too hard to see her, I think- she needs a better silhouette. The mood seems very creepy-- with the sort of empty well-lit space behind Alex, who's looking over his shoulder, I sort of expect something scary to appear over there. Is this from one of the boards? I think you're making it a bit complicated for yourself, and you could just have Kate walking to the door and Alex poking his head out of the elevator or something equally simple. Make Alex seem either cold or nervous or annoyed, and make Kate feel sarcastic, or bossy or something simple.
But even if you don't change the drawing, make it much lighter on the left. I would use the rule that Alex's hair/glasses could be one of the darkest things in the composition to make him more of a focal point.
I can meet you tomorrow sometime (not between 2-6) if you want some more help. :)
hey becky! i spent time revising it right now, lemme show you. And i've be stocked to meet up with you. I really want to start the color of this tonight, but i'd rather get the steps right first. Lemme repost.
I agree with what Kevan said, that it's a little hard to understand what's happening. I believe that Kate is next to Alex on the left? it is too hard to see her, I think- she needs a better silhouette.
回覆刪除The mood seems very creepy-- with the sort of empty well-lit space behind Alex, who's looking over his shoulder, I sort of expect something scary to appear over there. Is this from one of the boards? I think you're making it a bit complicated for yourself, and you could just have Kate walking to the door and Alex poking his head out of the elevator or something equally simple. Make Alex seem either cold or nervous or annoyed, and make Kate feel sarcastic, or bossy or something simple.
But even if you don't change the drawing, make it much lighter on the left. I would use the rule that Alex's hair/glasses could be one of the darkest things in the composition to make him more of a focal point.
I can meet you tomorrow sometime (not between 2-6) if you want some more help. :)
hey becky! i spent time revising it right now, lemme show you.
回覆刪除And i've be stocked to meet up with you. I really want to start the color of this tonight, but i'd rather get the steps right first. Lemme repost.