2012年10月30日 星期二

Exterior

This is the exterior.  Please crit so i can finalize it.


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  1. your lamp posts seem pretty huge compared to your person

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  2. You have some garage doors without driveways that would cut through the sidewalks. Also check the scale of those Tele poles in the bg.

    I think that, compositionally, the sky and street are too clean. Those tele poles sticking up from the top are too much contrast.

    There's also supposed to be snow. imagine that on this piece.

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