Feedback would be awesome. Been doing some props and the exterior i have thumbnails on another page for a floor chart for the neighborhood...still working on it. Got so much more to do! D: So any feedback send my direction! Sorry for the bad drawings! -_-
Hey Poly! Some cool stuff here. There's a design you have on the 2nd page of a wonky shelf that seems like a cool idea, but rather than curvy, smooth lines, I think there should be harder angles and straights. It would feel more sculpted and paranormal-like. You have a phone on the 3rd page that seems really on-the-mark shape-wise to me. Really good! Push your angles more like that. :) Also-I like the moose head. There's so much clutter in the apartment it seems like she would use the antlers to hang things on, or maybe to hold something like a bowl. It would be really cool! Also-you could push the shapes more on the moose, as well. Try to make the props almost funny, I think.
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yeah, more straights overall. Check out the ref Annlyn just put up! especially the chairs.
回覆刪除The hanging bug jars look pretty interesting. For Kate's building, try to make it stand out from the rest perhaps? More angular and in the book it is described as a "grey tower". And you can also be pretty creative with the security fencing around it and etc.
回覆刪除Thanks guys! Ill do my best and have more stuff and push them more!!
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